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Friday 24 June 2016

Narrative writing


Sunset appeared and Scruffy is taking a bath outside. Miranda sigh, “This is the fifth time I bathed you Scruffy.”  “ARF!” Barked scruffy. Miranda giggled.  Bubbles floating are in the air, Scruffy tried to catch it, but Miranda forced him to sit. “After this Scruffy I am going to dry you up and take you inside.”  But Scruffy didn’t listen. He jumped out of his bathtub and rolled on the grass. Miranda cried. “Nooo Scruffy!!”

Finally, a dog has created a problem.

It was too late. He rolled on the grass and….. Licking it! “Ewww” Miranda looked back. Suddenly a butterfly flying across her head, then  across to Scruffy and landed on  his nose. Scruffy barked, “ARF, ARF!” The butterfly flew away and Scruffy chased the butterfly.The butterfly flew across the muddy puddle. Scruffy knew that the muddy puddle was right in front of him, but he didn’t care. He jumped very far enough to reach the butterfly and… SPLASH! He’s in the mud! Miranda ran up, huffing and puffing, then she look down at Scruffy. “You're in trouble!” Yelled Miranda. Scruffy stared down at the mud, then walked back to his bathtub.

Resolution has finally found.

Miranda followed him and she could tell that Scruffy is very sad. Scruffy hopped in the bathtub. Miranda took the scrubbing and scrub the mud off. She looked at him, Scruffy’s head still down. “I’m sorry I yelled at you Scruffy, it’s for your own good.” Scruffy looked at her, then he looked down again. Mariand smiled at him and said,“I will give you doggy treats after this.” Then Scruffy put both of his paws at the top of Miranda's chest and he licked her face. He was happy. “Okay,okay enough with the sloppy kisses.” Miranda stopped him. Miranda lifted him out of the bath tub and dried him.


After Miranda dride him up, she lifted him and walked inside to the kitchen.  Miranda put him down gave him 4 doggy treats. For second she could barely hear him munching all those treats. Miranda giggled and kissed him on his forehead. “I will never, ever shout or yell at you again Scruffy.

Then their life was good.

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